Thursday, February 17, 2011

Two people came out of a building into a story.

These two people did not know that they would become famous for writing a story they witnessed that day. We all know the summarised story called Goldilocks and The Three Bears, but this is what the two people who came out of a building and into a story actually wrote:
One day three bears made some porridge but it was too hot to eat, so they decided to go for a walk. Goldilocks saw them leave the house and decided to break in and steal from the bears. As she entered she saw three bowls of porridge, she tried the first bowl which was too hot, she tried the second which was too cold and then tried the last bowl and that was just right and ate it all. The two people witnessed this through the window of the house.
The two people followed Goldilocks into the house and upstairs where she found three rocking chairs. She sat on the first, which was too hard, the second and that was too soft, then she tried the third, which was just right. By now the two people who walked out of a building and into a story noticed that Goldilocks was very tired and a bit on the lazy side of life. Goldilocks still did not notice that the two people were following her.
Goldilocks then went to the bedroom the three bears slept in, shortly followed by the two people. She tried the biggest bed, which was too hard, she tried the medium which was too soft, then she tried the smallest bed, which was just right and she immediately fell asleep. The two people learnt something about Goldilocks; she was a very picky person.
The three bears suddenly came back and the two people managed to escape out the window onto a tree. The bears noticed someone had been eating their porridge, they went upstairs and saw someone someone was sitting in their chairs. Then they go to their beds and see someone has been sleeping in their beds, and little bear sees Goldilocks sleeping in his bed.
By this time the bears were starving. Goldilocks woke up and the bears were standing over her with hungry eyes. The two people who came out of a building and into story witnessed how the three bears ate devoured. Today this story is sugar coated so that children do not get nightmares.

1 comment:

  1. Wow! I think I prefer the fairy tale with the happy ending.lol Poor Goldilocks.

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